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Draft 5 of my current project.
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=shadrian Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks nice, but I have two problems with it:

1) What is the focus? Is it the top area with a lot of whitespace? Is it the CD section, or the text below?

2) What is the top section with the placeholder image?

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That section would be for a card using a picture of the programmer and some quick information, a hire me button is also on the card. That's the primary focus. The CD's are also place holders for project screenshots. The text is just notes and such.
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=shadrian Feb 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see, well nice design. I just couldn't catch the focus.

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